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后天就要考试了,求高手批改托福独立作文!我感觉自己这次要悲剧了.唉.Forsuccessfuldevelopmentofacountry,shouldagovernmentfocusitsbudgetmoreonveryyoungchildreneducationratherthanonuniversities?RecentlyIsaw

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后天就要考试了,求高手批改托福独立作文!我感觉自己这次要悲剧了.唉.Forsuccessfuldevelopmentofacountry,shouldagovernmentfocusitsbudgetmoreonveryyoungchildreneducationratherthanonuniversities?RecentlyIsaw
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  写得挺好的,但有一些小错误.1、continuefocus改为continuetofocus2、oneofthemostimportantenergyinstitution,其中institution要加s,还有后面whichplay,play加s.3、spendtensofthousandsofdoll...

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